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Thursday, 4 January 2018

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69. Bassanio’s opening talk can be seen as a chummy elaboration upon Antonio’s previous remark about Gratziano’s
empty talk. In Q1, these lines do not appear in meter, which is odd since all the verse preceding it and following it,
are in meter. Moreover, these are the first lines uttered by our romantic hero, which, though light-hearted and
playful, should, at least, be delivered in the standard meter. It could be, however, for no clear reason, that this nonmetered
opening by Bassanio was a deliberate attempt to first present Bassanio as somewhat awkward with his
words. Most likely, however, (and consistent with Antonio’s previous line, which is corrupt) this non-metered
opening by Bassanio resulted from some problem with the reading of the text and not by original design. Q1
(uncorrected) reads: {Gratiano speaks and infinite deale of nothing more then any man in all Venice, his reasons are
as two graines of wheate hid in two bushels of chaffe: you shall seeke all day ere you finde them, and when you have
them, they are not worth the search.}. [See Additional Notes, 1.1.118]
70. {His reasons are as two grains of wheat hid in two bushels of chaff:}
his reasons: his point, his conclusions; the value of what he says
/ All of his wit are as two grains of wheat | Hid in two bushels full of worthless chaff—
71. / In all of Venice. And, his final point
Is like a grain of wheat in’a heap of chaff:
72. / He speaks an infinite deal of nothing, | More so than any man in all of Venice. | His point resembles but two
grains of wheat | Hid in two bushels of chaff. You must seek | All day before you find them; and when you | Finally
have them, they’re not worth the search.
73. {Well, tell me now what lady is the same | To whom you swore a secret pilgrimage}
Some commentators surmise that Antonio’s sadness has come about due to Bassanio’s secret rendezvous
with a woman. However, this conclusion is forced and unlikely. Antonio’s sadness is a result of his disposition,
which is confirmed by Antonio when he states that the part he has been selected to play, on the world stage, is a sad
one [78-79]. Bassanio’s potential love interest may have exacerbated Antonio’s worrisome condition but this, too, is
unlikely, since Bassanio did not even know the identity of the woman with whom Bassanio was meeting. All
Antonio knew was that Bassanio was meeting with some woman, whose identity he swore to keep secret—and whom
he promised to tell Antonio about (after the meeting was over). Bassanio was well aware of the nature of the
meeting, and that the subject discussed involved Antonio in some way, and that is why Bassanio told Antonio about
the ‘secret’ meeting and told him that he (Bassanio) was going to tell him about what he learned from the meeting
today. (We can assume that the meeing took palce yesterday, as Bassanio would not delay in telling Antonio about
it—especially if Antonio’s help, with respect to actuating the plan formulated during the meeting, was needed.)
Who was this lady to whom Bassanio swore to meet with in secret (and to keep the whole meeting a secret,
and to keep secret the identity of the woman with whom he was meeting)? Certainly it was not Portia, as Portia
would not have arranged such a meeting nor would she have any reason to meet with Bassanio. Neither was this a
meeting with an irrelevant love interest—or it would not have been so secretive and Bassanio would have no reason
to have discussed it with Antonio.
In the meeting we know that Bassanio learned about Portia and the lottery—yet this was not something that
needed to be sealed by a vow of secrecy, as this was public knowledge. The meeting had an undisclosed purpose
such that Bassanio could not even reveal the identity of the lady with whom he was meeting (for he did not know it)
to his dearest friend—nor was he at liberty to tell his dearest friend anything about the meeting, nor what was
discussed, nor the identity of the woman with whom he met (after he discovered her identity). All we know is that
Bassanio does not talk about whom he met with—the one he promised to tell Antonio about—but only about what he
learned from the meeting (which concerns Portia’s situation and no other).
So, whom did he meet with and for what purpose? All indications suggest that he met with Nerissa, Portia’s
trusting handmaid, to discuss Portia and the lottery. He told Antonio about the meeting because as he correctly
anticipated, he needed a large sum of money (from Antonio) in order to carry out the plan hatched out in the meeting.
[See, Additional Notes, 1.1.120]


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74. Bassanio tells nothing of the woman he met with, only about his plan and his need of Antonio’s help
75. Bassanio seems to be part of an aristocratic class called ‘gentlemen’—a class of young, single men living off
their parentage inheritance (or estate). As they do not need to work, their days are concerned with entertainment,
parties, feasting, womanizing, etc.
76. {By something showing a more swelling port} / By showing off a more lavish life-style
77. / Nor do I make moan that such noble° spending / lordly
/ Has been abridged.° But now my chief concern / cut short
78. {Wherein my time something too prodigal}
too prodigal: too extravagant and wasteful
79. {Hath left me gaged}
gaged: a) engaged (with creditors), indebted, owing, entangled, pledged, bound
b) gaged, bound by a gag, muzzled. The implication here is that Bassanio wasted all his money on high
living and feasting (something too prodigal) and is now gaging (choking) on this pile debt in the same way as one
might gag on biting off more food than he can chew.
80. a) Is to come clear° of all the debts amassed° / pay off // accrued
During my time of prodigal spending,° / improvident waste
Which now I gag upon. To you, my friend
b) Is to come fully clear from all my debts
Which I’ve amassed from years° of wasteful spending
Which now I gag upon. To you, my friend
c) Is to come fully clear of the great debts
/ Wherein my time of wonton wastefulness | Hath left me now to gag upon. To you
/ Which all my time of prodigal expense | Hath left me bound and indebted. To you
81. {And from your love I have a warranty}
/ And by your love, I have a guarantee / And now your love does grant me permission
82. Here Bassanio claims: I will unburden all my plots and purposes yet he never discloses anything to Antonio
about the woman with whom he met nor his true plot—a plot which involves winning Portia by way of a lottery not
by customary courtship (as Antonio may be led to believe). Bassanio tells Antonio about Portia, and his sureness of
winning her, but does not disclose the means (i.e. the lottery), nor the identity of the woman with whom he met, nor
the true reason as to why he is so certain (and ‘questionless’) of victory. Bassanio (leading Antonio to believe his
venture involves a typical courtship scenario) tells Antonio he is sure to win her because she once looked upon him
favorably—but such a favorable glance has no bearing on his odds of winning her. It is irrelevant. He can only win
her by choosing the right chest, through his own wit and wisdom—or through some other kind of help—and not
through anything Portia’s favorable glances could bestow.



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83. {And if it stand, as you yourself still do, | Within the eye of honour}
> if your plan is righteous, honorable, above board, ethical, etc.
Antonio is adding a caveat here: Bassanio’s plan must stand within the eye of honour. However, the plan as
we know it, which involves a chance lottery (or, as we may surmise, receiving a guarantee of help from Nerissa if
certain conditions are met) is not honorable. As such, Bassanio does not tell Antonio the actual plan, nor “unburden
all his pots and purposes.” He presents what appears to be a normal courtship scenario without any mention of the
actual plot or circumstances. (When does Antonio finally learn about the true nature of the chance venture?—and
what does he do when he finds out that Bassanio has borrowed the money under a false pretense?) It seems
Antonio’s blind love for Bassanio causes him to see past all of Bassanio’s flaws, even the avoidable action of failing
to cure Antonio’s bond when he had means enough, and time enough, to do so. [See Additional Notes, 1.1.137]
84. Bassanio asking Antonio for money—yet again—might suggests some kind of abuse. In the past Bassanio has
borrowed money from Antonio to ‘show a more swelling port’ and to live beyond his means—and he made no
attempt to repay any of the borrowed money. Here again, knowing that most of Antonio’s money is tied up in his
ventures, Bassanio again comes to Antonio. It seems that Antonio loves this young man, who is high-spirited and
who brings to Antonio a sense of life he is missing—so much so that he is willing to do anything for him. Bassanio
is aware of Antonio’s love and he uses that affection—perhaps in an innocent or careless way, as opposed to a
deceitful or knowingly abusive way—for his own financial benefit. Bassanio, too, has genuine love for Antonio, so
the relationship is one of mutual support and friendship.
85. {I shot his fellow of the selfsame flight | The selfsame way}
/ I shot another in the selfsame way | And in the selfsame direction, but then
/ I’d see exactly where the next one fell, | And in venturing forth I oft found both.
86.{To find the other forth, and by adventuring both, | I oft found both}
/ Then I would venture for the second shaft, | And oft found both.
/ Then, by adventuring for the second, | I oft found both.
oft: often—often, but not always; the venture had some risk and sometimes both arrows were lost.
87. Not true! The plan—which is never truly told to Antonio—is far from innocent. In the highest embodiment
(and most unlikely scenario) it involves a deceitful appearance and an uncertain choice between three caskets; in the
lowest embodiment (and most likely scenario) it involves “cheating”(for good reasons, no doubt) and the unfair
winning of another’s wealth. The plan, moreover, is somewhat mercenary; it is first proposed as a way to clear up all
of Bassanio’s debts rather than the defiant and risky action of someone truly in love.
88. {. . . I do not doubt, | As I will watch the aim, or to find both}
I do not doubt. . .
/ That I will watch the aim and then find both
/ I’ll watch the aim with care and find them both.


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51. The meeting Lorenzo is referring to involves the planning to steal Jessica [2.4]. This meeting involves the two
Sals, not Bassanio. Hence, Lorenzo’s reminder of such a meeting to Bassanio—and the assurance made in the next
line by Bassanio [I will not fail you]—as found in the original, is amiss. [See next note].
52. In the original, this line is attributed to Bassanio, and reads: ‘I will not fail you’ and is spoken after Salarino and
Salanio have already exited. Thus Bassanio is telling Lorenzo that he (Bassanio) will not fail him (Lorenzo) and that
he will be there as planned. However, there is no future plan involving Lorenzo and Bassanio. [See Additional
Notes, 1.1.72]
53. Some commentators suggest that the play may have initially opened here, at line 73. Gratziano’s opening
statement resembles that of Antonio’s opening, and the discourse that follows is similar in tone to the previous
conversation had with Salarino and Salanio. [See Additional Notes, 1.1.73] [See Appendix: The Three Sallies]
54. {You have too much respect upon the world}
55. {They lose it that do buy it with much care}
/ When too concerned about what can go wrong | You can’t enjoy all the things that are right.
/ All this concern with loss does have a cost: | You can’t enjoy all the great things that you have.
Gratziano is saying that one who buys life with too much care (i.e., spends too much time in worry and sadness),
cannot enjoy life. In other words, things usually turn out poorly for one who is too concerned about how things will
turn out.
56. {Believe me, you are marvellously changed}
/ Believe me, you are decidedly different / Believe me you look nothing like yourself / Believe me when I
say, you’re not yourself / Believe me, friend, you are completely changed
57. {Sit like his grandsire cut in alabaster}

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58. {Sleep when he wakes, and creep into the jaundice} / creep into an illness
/ Sleep when awake and give himself an illness
jaundice: a disease related to the liver and caused by an excess of yellow bile; as such, it brings a yellowish
complexion to the skin and whites of the eyes. Up until the 19 century, this disease was thought to have a th
psychosomatic origin. Hence, Gratziano is saying that Antonio is going to get jaundice as a result his depressed
disposition (which makes him appear as though he is asleep when awake).
59. {I tell the what, Antonio— | I love thee, and ‘tis my love that speaks:}
60. {There are a sort of men whose visages | Do cream and mantle like a standing pond | And do a willful stillness
entertain}
cream and mantle: cover over and mask; become pale and mask-like. This image suggests a) the algae that floats
upon the surface of a stagnant pond (covering the interior of the pond), or b) the covering of cream on milk. [See
Additional Notes, 1.1.90]
61. {With purpose to be dressed in an opinion}
62. {Of wisdom, gravity, profound conceit} / As men of profound wisdom and insight.
gravity: authority, seriousness, weight
profound conceit: deep thinking; those who deeply contemplate the matter
63. {If they should speak, would almost dam those ears}
dam: dam, clog up, block, stop damn: damn, curse, foul
64. {But fish not with this melancholy bait | For this fool gudgeon, this opinion.}
fool gudgeon: gudgeon are fish which were thought to be gullible, easy believers in the bait, (and which would
bite and anything). Thus they were easy to catch. Some editions use Pope’s emendation of: fool’s gudgeon.
opinion: the opinion that others will think you are wise because you look sad and do not open your mouth.
65. There are three direct references that the parties are going meet later for dinner [70, 104, 105], plus a response to
those references [72]. Is dinner in these references the same as the supper which Bassanio has the night he leaves for
Belmont or is there some other meeting indicated?

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66. {Fare you well. I’ll grow a talker for this gear} / Farewell, I’ll grow more of a talker next time
gear: a) discourse, talk. ‘Farewell, I’ll take your advice and become more of a talker (next time we meet);
b) matter, affair. ‘Farewell, now that you’re gone, and I’m with Bassanio, I’ll become a talker—for this
matter, now that there is something relevant to speak about.’
c) reason ‘Farewell, ‘I’ll talk more (with respect to your advice) so that others do not think that I silent (for
the reason you mentioned) to try and get others to think I am full of wisdom and profound understanding—which is
not the case.’
67. {Thanks, i’faith, for silence is only commendable | In a neat’s tongue dried and a maid not vendible.}
/ Please do, for silence is best in ox-tongue, | And in craggy old maids no longer young.
/ Please do, for silence’s best in ox-tongue dried, | And in a maid too old to be a bride.
neat’s tongue dried: the dried tongue of an ox, which is commendable precisely because one does not want this
kind of tongue to talk—one wants it to be dead, dried, and ready to eat. (Some commentators suggest that this
reference to neat’s tongue dried may be a bawdy a reference to the dried up penis of an old man which cannot
become erect—but why Gratziano would find this commendable is unclear).
not vendible: not saleable. Refers to a maid who cannot be sold (with a dowry) in the way of marriage—and
thus a maid who is worthless and unsaleable. The implication is that someone who is old and unwed (and whom
nobody wants) would speak with bitter and complaining words—so her silence would be welcomed. Some interpret
not vendible as referring to a maid who is too young and not yet saleable (in the marketplace of marriage)—and
whose talk might be witless. It seems more likely that Gratziano would commend silence in a craggy old maid (who
is wont to complain) rather than in a young maid who is not yet of a marriageable age. [See Additional Notes,
1.1.112]
68. {It is that any thing now.}
/ He speaks and speaks, and yet says not a thing / He speaks a lot, yet says a lot of nothing.
This line, as it appears in Q1, is missing three syllables and does not fit the standard meter. Editors have treated
this anomalous line in several ways: A) Left it as is. B) Deleted the opening ‘It’ and posited that the line as a
question: ‘Is that anything now?’—which means: ‘What was all that talk about?’ This renders the line somewhat
intelligible, but does not correct the line structure. (This emendation was first proposed by Rowe). C) Changed It to
Yet:‘Yet is that anything now?’ With this emendation, Antonio is apparently referring to the newfound silence
(which is being enjoyed since Gratziano, the talker, has just left). This emendation is based upon the supposition
that ‘Yet’ was found in the original manuscript, and somehow became ‘Yt’ and then ‘It.’) All these textual
contortions do not improve the line. It is most likely that the original contained a full five iambs and part of the line
had become unreadable. Thus, the typesetter did his best in setting what part of the line he could read.
We find that the lines of Bassanio, which follow this one, are also corrupt in that they do not adhere to the
standard meter. Hence, one possibility is that the name Gratziano was originally intended to be part of Antonio’s
line, and somehow got shifted to Bassanio. If so, the lines might have appeared as follows:
Ant. Did Gratziano say anything now?
Bass. He speaks an infinite deal of nothing,
Ay, more than any man in all of Venice . . .
[See Additional Notes, 1.1.113.]



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Wednesday, 3 January 2018

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30. {Misfortune to my ventures, out of doubt | Would make me sad.}
/Misfortune to my ventures would, no doubt | But make me sad
31. By this description, and the preceding ones, we see that Salarino and Salanio are well-versed in the jargon of
merchants, and both appear to be involved in the business of trade, as is Antonio.
32. {And see my wealthy Andrew docked in sand,}
/ And how my ship, the Andrew, rife with wealth, | Might fall a-ground and die a woeful° death / piteous
33. / Laid out upon her burial like a shroud / Just like a shroud placed upon her grave / A shroud that kisses the
ground of her burial / And now to kiss the ground wherein she lies
34. {Vailing her high-top lower than her ribs | To kiss her burial}
vailing: lowering, bringing down
ribs: the hull of a ship, made up of wooden ribs or center beams
The image here is that of a ship overturned, with her top-sails now lower than her hull; the top-sails are now
kissing the ground, which is the place of the ship’s burial (and the once proud sails have now become its burial
shroud. [ See Additional Notes, 1.1.28]
35. / Would scatter all her spices on the wave
36. / I, too, would have a mind that’s fraught with sadness°
/ besieged by worry / filled with distress / sad and distraught
Salarino (and Salanio) are describing Antonio’s risky business ventures, which would elicit concern, worry,
agitation, stress, etc. rather than sadness. (Thus, ‘sadness’ in this context should be taken to mean, ‘worry, concern,
distress,’ etc.) This talk of Antonio’s sadness seems to be an import of an earlier draft of the play, where the play
initially opened with Antonio talking with Gratziano and Lorenzo about his (Antonio’s) sad nature. Later in the
scene we see the same conversation about Antonio’s sadness repeated with Gratziano—and this relates to Antonio’s
sad and depressed nature, and not a new-arising sadness, related to a specific conditions (as is the subject of the
conversation with Salarino and Salanio).
37. / Is worried when he thinks upon his ventures
These two lines are superfluous and appear too bold for either Salarino or Salanio—sounding more like
something Gratziano would say. These lines may be vestiges of an earlier draft which involved a conversation
between Antonio and Gratziano. Thus, these two lines could be deleted without any a meaningful loss and perhaps.


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with a slight improvement in the flow of the text.
38. Previously, Antonio’s sadness was thought to be venture-related, then love-related—both causes of which
Antonio denied. Here Salanio is surmising that Antonio must be sad because it is his nature to be sad. This
philosophical address of Antonio sad nature is repeated later in the scene by Gratziano. It is likely, that in an earlier
draft, Salanio’s words were mouthed by Lorenzo (or possibly Gratziano) and herein transposed (somewhat
imperfectly) to Salanio. Salanio (and Salarino) seem to know a lot about Antonio’s business venture but little about
his sad nature. [See Additional Notes, 1.1.47]
39. / Neither in love? Ah, then you must be sad
40. {Now, by two-headed Janus}
Janus: the Roman god of exits and entrances, who has two faces (not two heads) which looks in opposite
directions; one face is smiling and the other is frowning. One god, having two opposite faces, suggests the singular
root of both comedy and tragedy.
41. / Now, by Janus’s | Two faces, one which laughs and one which cries
/ But here we see | Two sides of Janus—one laughing, one crying
/ But here are Janus’ | Two heads, that face in opposite directions
42. {some that will evermore peep through their eyes}
This line refers to people who smile so much so that their cheek muscles have atrophied and now keep their
eyes half-shut—and now they can only peep through them. The image, akin to the laughing face of Janus, is of a
person smiling so much that it looks as if he is wearing the mask of a smiling face.
/ Some that can barely see through so much smiling / Some that e’er peep through eyes half-shut by smiling
43. laugh like parrots: a) refers to the parrot who by rote response laughs at everything, even a mournful tune.
Hence, laughing like a parrot refers to one who laughs at everything; one who is always laughing. b) implies a loud
screeching laughter rather than the actual laughter of a parrot.
44. {at a bagpiper} The music of a bagpipe was considered woeful, which should bring on tears, not laughter.
45. / And there be others of such gloomy aspect (/sullen mode) / And others of such a vinegary aspect (/ sullen
temperament) / And there be others of such sour mode / And there are others, so sour and tart.

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46. {Though Nestor swear the jest be laughable}
Nestor: a Greek officer of the Iliad, famous for his soberness and gravity.
/ Not even at a jest that able to rouse | Stern-browèd Nestor to rambunctious laughter.
/ Not even at a joke that could bestir | The somber Nestor into drunken laughter.
/ E’en at a jest that would rouse stern-browèd | Nestor into a most rambunctious laughter.
47. The name of these two characters, Salarino and Salanio, are never mentioned in the play even though it is
customary to name a character upon his entrance or during the first scene in which he appears. The failure to ever
mention the names of these minor but significant characters may be because these they were not conceived as part of
the original draft but added as part of a later draft. Thus, throughout the play, these two characters remain nameless.
To rectify this omission, a line which includes both their names, could be added here.
48. {You grow exceedingly strange. Must it be so?}
exceedingly strange: (a) like strangers, (b) strange in your ways, i.e, too reserved, too serious, not willing to get
together for a laugh.
Must it be so?: (a) i.e., it should not be that way and we must do something about it—such as get together for a
laugh. (b) must you be so serious and not willing to laugh with us.
49. In Q1 the speech heading reads Sal. which is most often attributed to Salarino. Due to the confusion in
abbreviations found in Q1, and because Salarino and Salanio often talk in tandem, this line is attributed to Salanio.
50. This exchange seems more of a gratuitous gesture than an actual intention to get together. We sense a cordial
distance between Bassanio and Salarino-Salanio, as they all seek Antonio’s attention. Bassanio may view the Sals as
fans, supporters, and ‘lesser friends’ of Antonio.

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THE MERCHANT OF VENICE by “William Shakespeare”
A Contemporary English Version,
Emended and Rectified with Notes and Commentary
by Jonathan Star

DRAMATIS PERSONÆ

DUKE OF VENICE
PRINCE OF MOROCCO (MOROCHO-Q1, MOROCHUS-Q1)
PRINCE OF ARRAGON (ARAGON)
                        A suitors to Portia

ANTONIO (ANTHONIO-Q1 ), a merchant of Venice, friend of Bassanio
BASSANIO, winner of Portia
LEONARDO, a servant to Bassanio
GRATZIANO (GRATIANO-Q1, GRAZIANO), friend of Bassanio, with Nerissa
LORENZO (LORENSO), friend of Gratziano, with Jessica
SALARINO                                                       |
SALANIO-Q1 (SOLANIO-Q1)                        | friends of Antonio
SALERIO, a messenger from Venice                |


SHYLOCK (SHYLOCKE-Q1) a Jewish money-lender
JESSICA, daughter of Shylock, with Lorenzo
TUBAL (TUBALL-Q1), a Jew, friend of Shylock

LAUNCELET -Q1 (LANCELET-Q2, LAUNCELOT, LANCELOT), a fool, servant to Shylock
OLD GOBBO (GOBBO), father to Launcelet

PORTIA, an heiress of Belmont
NERISSA, her waiting-woman
BALTHASAR-Q1 (BALTHAZAR) |
STEPHANO (STEFANO) | servants of Portia

MESSENGER, for Portia
SERVANT (SERVINGMAN), for Portia
MAN, messenger for Antonio
MESSENGER, for Jessica

Magnificoes of Venice, Officers of the Court of Justice,
a Jailor, Servants and other Attendants

[See Additional Notes, 0.1.1, for a further discussion on the names]

Editions

Editions and Printing Dates:-
First Quarto (Q1), 1600. The Most Excellent Historie of the Merchant of Venice.
Second Quarto (Q2), 1619. The Excellent History of the Merchant of Venice.
Third Quarto (Q3), 1637. The Most Excellent Historie of the Merchant of Venice.
First Folio (F1), 1623; Second Folio (F2), 1632; Third Folio (F3), 1663; Fourth Folio (F4), 1685

Punctuation Key

Punctuation Key:-
a) All line numbering and text references generally follow The Merchant of Venice, Oxford
Edition, edited by Jay L. Halio, 1993.
b) Text found within {special brackets} is a reference to the text as found in Q1.
c) Text which follows ‘ / ’ or ‘// ’ indicates alternative renderings.
d) Words found within + single brackets , indicate text which was not found in the original yet
which was suggested by, or which clarifies, the original. Words found within ++ double brackets
,, indicate text which has been added to the original and which was not indicated nor suggested
by the original text.
e) Text found within jopen square bracketsk was not found in the original but is directly indicated
by the original.
f) Text found within [brackets] indicate text which is found in the original but which is suspect.
g) An arrow ‘ > ‘ indicates a commentary on the text.



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ACT ONE - Scene One (1.1)

1
. These opening lines of Antonio are not found in the original play and were added to focus and clarify the central
conflict of the play (between Antonio and Shylock) which is principally over usury, not religion. In the original we
find Antonio musing over his serious and concerned demeanor (or “sadness’) yet such a theme has no direct
relevance to the plot nor does it set up a context for understanding the action of play. [To understand usury as it was
viewed in Elizabethan England, see Additional Note, 1.1.0]
2. / But I am sickened by their very sight
3. / A plague afflicting the goodness of man / A plague upon the righteousness of man / A plague afflicting the spirit
of man / A plague destroying the very heart of man / A plague that ravages the heart of man / A plague that crushes (/
destroys / ruins / shatters) the spirit of man / That which destroys the righteousness of man
4. / And all their contracts, listing penalties / And all the loans they make with forfeitures
5. / Made with a show of kindness and of friendship / Made under pretense of kindness and friendship / With shows
of kindness and seeming friendship
6. / Are none but fell deceit and thievery
7. Option, add line: +Taking a loan beyond their means to pay,,
8. / All one has worked for and gained in his life / All that a man has made and gained in life / All that a man has
gained in years of work
9. / Would soon come to a sad and ruinous end / / Would end in sorrow, pain, and tearful ruin / Would end in
sadness and a tearful ruin / Would come to sadness and ruin in the end.
10. / ‘Tis a greed most obscene and despicable / Showing a greed obscene and despicable / It is a show of greed,
gross and despicable
11. / They but entrap those who are most desperate:
Having them sign a bond to borrow money
For which they cannot repay, then as forfeit,
And after great despair, all that these men have
Is taken, all they have worked for is lost;
All is but gone to these heartless usurers.
12. / . . . and gained in life | Is lost—but gone to these heartless usurers. |
‘Tis an obscene, despisèd greed they show.



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13. / ‘Tis more a foul disease
14. / But oft you’ve heard me moan,° /my grievance
15. / But here this face so sad, we know not well. | Why look ye so, my friend; what has got you?
/ But here this face so saddened, ‘tis a sight | We know not well. Why look ye so, my friend?
/ But here this face so sad,‘tis not a sight | We know. Why look ye so, my friend? Why so?
16. The original play begins here, with Antonio talking about his sad and worrisome state. The play opens in media
res, in the middle of an ongoing conversation between Antonio, Salarino, and Salanio, where Antonio is answering a
question that was asked before the action of the play begins.
17. The term sad generally means grave, serious, or concerned. The commiserating images supplied by Salarino and
Salanio (your mind is tossing on the ocean) suggest that Antonio’s state resembles some kind of uneasiness or worry
rather than sadness or depression. In all of this we never discover why Antonio is so grave or concerned—is it his
nature to be grave (as later suggested by himself) or has his concern been brought about by some recent event? In
either case, the issue of Antonio’s grave nature has no bearing on the play nor does it make any further appearance.
Antonio’s talk of ‘sadness’ (or concern) could simply be a tool which allows the Sals to describe the grandeur of
Antonio’s sea ventures. Some commentators hold that the early talk of ‘sadness’ is meant to present a sense of
foreboding but the jovial way that the subject is approached precludes this. [See Additional Note, 1.1.1] [For a
rectification of this scene, as it may have appeared in an earlier draft, see Appendix].
18. {It wearies me, you say it wearies you}
As it stands, this line is somewhat misplaced and may be an appendage from an earlier draft, where the
opening conversation was between Antonio, Gratziano, and Lorenzo, and where this line was originally voiced by
Gratziano. This lines suggest that Antonio has spoken about his serious nature on numerous occasions, so much so
that it wearies him (talking about it) and it wearies Salarino (and Salanio) upon hearing it. The line (as it stands in
the original) is also questionable, since Antonio’s sadness seems to be something newly experienced by the Sals, and
not something they could have grown weary of. In addition, the Sals, who are unmitigated supporters of Antonio,
would never have told Antonio that they were weary of hearing about his concerns.
I think: {you say} I hear, I know, I believe, I’m sure. This line (and especially the reference to you say) is
most likely a remnant from a prior draft of the play where it opened, in media res, with Antonio, Gratziano, and
Lorenzo (and not with Salarino and Salanio.) Hence, the familiar and history-based phrase, you say, was likely
directed to Gratziano (as a singular)—a person who was familiar with Antonio’s sad musings, and a person who
would have told Antonio that he (Gratziano) was weary of hearing about Antonio’s sadness. As neither Salarino nor
Salanio have heard much about Antonio’s sadness in the past—and as neither are so chummy and bold as to tell
Antonio they are weary of hearing about it—neither would have made such a comment. [See Additional Notes,
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19. +And why it lingers on, / And why is has (/grips) me so / And why it doth remain / And why I hold it so
The line found in Q1 ( I am to learn) is truncated, containing only two iambs (feet), as opposed to the usual
five—i.e., four syllables as opposed to ten. It is also missing a connector, such as ‘and.’ Thus, the line as it appears
is likely an error, and was not intended by the author. This short line could resulted from a smudge mark, rendering
the text unreadable or some other such error. [For theories about this truncated line, See Additional Notes, 1.1.5]
20. There are several anomalies with respect to Antonio’s opening lines, including the words ‘you say’ [2], the
truncated line 5, and the repetitive and unsupported content of lines 6 and 7. Clearly these later two lines [6-7] are
orphaned, repeat the sentiment of the previous lines, and weaken the overall import of the passage. Due to their
prominent position in the original play (appearing in the opening passage), and being that they stand rather harmless,
they could remain; being that they weaken the passage, may have found their way into the text by error—and in
context of the emended opening about usury—these lines should be deleted. [See Additional Notes, 1.1.6]
21. / Your mind does toss like ships upon the wave
22. {Like signiors and rich burghers on the flood} / Like proud magnificoes° upon° the wave,
burghers: wealthy Venetians, rich citizens
23. {Or as it were the pageants of the sea} / Or like the grand water-floats of a pageant
/ Or like the festive pageants of the sea
pageants of the sea: floats and displays that were used on ships, as part of a festive pageantry held on the water.
Pageants, like modern-day floats used in a parade, refer to large displays (such as castles, ships, or other staged
figures) that were wheeled about the streets in ancient shows or pageants, or ships that provided such displays.
24. {Do overpeer the petty traffickers} / Where they but dwarf the petty traffickers
overpeer: peer over, look down on, tower above
petty traffickers: / petty trading ships / petty trade vessels / smaller merchant ship / smaller trading ships
25. {That curtsey to them, do them reverence} / That come to lower their topsails in reverence / That do but bow to
them in utter reverence / And moving them to curtsy low in reverence / Impelling them to bow in awe reverence
cursy (Q1 = cursie) / curtsy: bow down. Refers to the image of: a) small ships that bob around in the wake of a
passing argosy, which seemingly (and impelled by the wake) bow down or curtsy to these larger ships, or b) small
cargo ships which would lower their topmasts as a sign of respect at the passing of a much larger ship. In both
cases, there a show of reverence, akin to a tradesman bowing to a passing dignitary of higher rank
26. woven wing: The large sails on Antonio’s ships are likened to the wings of flying bird (for their speed) or to the
‘billowing splendor’ of the clothes worn by wealthy burghers.
27. / Were all my wealth involved in such ventures
28. {I should be still} / Each day I’d be
still: always
29. {Plucking the grass to know where sits the wind}

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William Shakespeare (/ˈʃeɪkspɪər/; 26 April 1564 (baptised) – 23 April 1616)
[a] was an English poet, playwright and actor, widely regarded as the greatest writer in the English language and the world's pre-eminent dramatist. He is often called England's national poet and the "Bard of Avon".
[b] His extant works, including collaborations, consist of approximately 39 plays,
[c] 154 sonnets, two long narrative poems and a few other verses, some of uncertain authorship. His plays have been translated into every major living language and are performed more often than those of any other playwright.

Shakespeare was born and brought up in Stratford-upon-Avon, Warwickshire. At the age of 18, he married Anne Hathaway, with whom he had three children: Susanna and twins Hamnet and Judith. Some time between 1585 and 1592, he began a successful career in London as an actor, writer, and part-owner of a playing company called the Lord Chamberlain's Men, later known as the King's Men. At age 49 around 1613, he appears to have retired to Stratford, where he died three years later. Few records of Shakespeare's private life survive, which has stimulated considerable speculation about such matters as his physical appearance, sexuality, religious beliefs and whether the works attributed to him were written by others. These speculations are often criticized for failing to point out the fact that few records survive of most commoners of his period.

Shakespeare produced most of his known work between 1589 and 1613.
[d] His early plays were primarily comedies and histories, which are regarded as some of the best work ever produced in these genres. He then wrote mainly tragedies until about 1608, including Hamlet, Othello, King Lear and Macbeth, considered some of the finest works in the English language. In his last phase, he wrote tragicomedies, also known as romances and collaborated with other playwrights.

Many of his plays were published in editions of varying quality and accuracy during his lifetime. However, in 1623 John Heminges and Henry Condell, two friends and fellow actors of Shakespeare, published a more definitive text known as the First Folio, a posthumous collected edition of his dramatic works that included all but two of the plays now recognised as Shakespeare's. It was prefaced with a poem by Ben Jonson, in which Shakespeare is hailed, presciently, as "not of an age, but for all time".

In the 20th and 21st centuries, his works have been repeatedly adapted and rediscovered by new movements in scholarship and performance. His plays remain highly popular and are constantly studied, performed, and reinterpreted in diverse cultural and political contexts throughout the world.

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Arguably the greatest English-language playwright, William Shakespeare was a seventeenth-century writer and dramatist, and is known as the Bard of Avon. Under the patronage of Queen Elizabeth I, he penned more than 30 plays, 154 sonnets, and numerous narrative poems and short verses. Equally accomplished in histories, tragedies, comedy, and romance, Shakespeare s most famous works include Romeo and Juliet, Hamlet, Macbeth, King Lear, The Taming of the Shrew, and As You Like It.
Like many of his contemporaries, including Christopher Marlowe, Shakespeare began his career on the stage, eventually rising to become part-owner of Lord Chamberlain s Men, a popular dramatic company of his day, and of the storied Globe Theatre in London.

Extremely popular in his lifetime, Shakespeare s works continue to resonate more than three hundred years after his death. His plays are performed more often than any other playwright s, have been translated into every major language in the world, and are studied widely by scholars and students.


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